考研英语二大作文一般为图表写作,即按照所给图表现的社会现象等给出说明、分析。考生在应对大作文考试时,一般都可采用三段式的写作方式:首段描述图表内容,具体描写图片中突出的主题,突出的细节。第二段写造成上述现象的原因,并分析造成这种现象的根源。最后一段写总结、预测或提出建议等内容。我们以2015年考研英语大作文为例,分析一下具体写作步骤。

  2015年考研英语二:Part B

  Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should

  (1) interpret the chart, and

  (2) give your comments

  You should write about 150 words.(15points)

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  首段首句描述这个饼状图,以及表中各个部分数据组成。第二句应写细节描述,分别描述占比的新年礼物和其次的交通、聚会吃饭与其他。第二段的写法多种多样,如果针对这种送新年礼物的风气进行评析,可以作为一个负面话题来分析原因或者举例子;也可以作为一个正面话题来谈论,谈一谈这种人际交往的形式——互送礼物,其目的是为了增强朋友家人间的感情。甚至可以作为一个中立话题来谈一谈假期开销的不同方面,消费方式的多种多样性等等。不管以哪种方式写,写成原因列举,首句可写主题句,承上启下进行过渡。其次具体说明二至三点原因,可写为何新年礼物花销或交通、聚会吃饭也占据一些比例。第三段可预测图表发展趋势、进行归纳结论或提出建议措施。

  【 参考范文】

  The pie chart drawing the different proportion of residents’ consumption in a Chinese city during Spring Festival. To be specific, the percent age of consumption on New Year’s gifts, party, traffic and others is 40%, 20%, 20% and 20% respectively. Surprisingly, the pertinent number about gifts is 40%. Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected tone another closely.

  Undoubtedly true,the purpose of the graph is to showcase the diversity of residents’ consumption during holidays in China, especially over-consumption on gifts as a frequent way of interpersonal communication. What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? It’s a thought-provoking question. First and foremost, advertisements of mass media, such as radio, television and Internet, might be misleading. Plus, pertinent action taken by the public to put an end to this trend might be little and limit. Therefore, people, men and women, old and young, in mounting numbers are spending too much on holiday gift which floods everywhere.

  To sum it up, there is an upward tendency for people these days to spend money on festival presents rather than other things, which I believe will not change in a short time. To reverse the trend is not a piece of cake, which requires a good awareness of consumption value and interpersonal communication. Only in this way can we have colorful festival sand relaxing times.

  该文全面清晰地描述了春节期间不同消费模式所占不同比例的原因,并对这种原因给出了自己的解释,最后呼吁大家在假日期间合理消费。思路清晰,用词准确。其中很多用词用句都值得考生借鉴。考试在即,最后阶段作文成绩的提升空间是的,文都教育建议2016考生一定要多动手写,多思考,然后多从范文中借鉴更好的表达,拓展写作思路。文都教育预祝2016考研学子金榜题名!

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